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Crowned at Twilight by BarktheBear Crowned at Twilight by BarktheBear
(Not sure if the scene where her friends see her with wings is early morning or early night, but it would be such cool attention to detail if she actually became an Alicorn at Twilight :D)
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klokateer666 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
Yeah, All Hail Twilight Sparkle, the new Princess of Equestria!! I am glad my favorite pony Twilight Sparkle is now an Alicorn.
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TwilightIsMagic Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Student General Artist
Well, she did return to Equestria at twilight. The cutie mark star from the sky sequence. So the episode got ya covered.

Hmm... The expression feels just a tiny bit off, might be because of the placement of the muzzle. However, the rest is rather nice indeed. That's a very bright sun for a sunset, as well, but it can be forgiven. 's a nice night sky above, and the general lighting on the clouds is not bad. I like the shading on the towers. I also like the shading on Twily's body, as well as how you colour her entirely in shades of purple. Not a bad depiction of her feathers, and it's some rather fine flowing hair here. Her neck feels a bit too thin, but the way she holds her hooves being so cute makes up for that.
Not a bad picture. Well done.

All hail Princess Twilight!
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BarktheBear Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think what went wrong with the muzzle was I referenced a screenshot of her smiling, but the smile wasnt as wide, so whereas the rest of her face is in the same position, her muzzle makes it look strange. I might tinker it later if I can.

Thank you so much for taking the time to critique this! :D
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TwilightIsMagic Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Student General Artist
I actually think moving the nose a bit to the right, closer to the viewer and the center of the image, and showing more of her mouth would do the trick. As it is, I think her muzzle seems like we're seeing it from a more oblique angle than the rest of her body.
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BarktheBear Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I did a little promo of that, but by making her head more to the right, it made her neck look even smaller and more lopsided
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TwilightIsMagic Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Student General Artist
I guess you could try expanding her neck and chest on the front a bit. Give it more substance. It'll be better then.
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BarktheBear Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
the only way to do that would be to redraw the entirety of the pose then redraw it, but I really dont have the time to do this entire picture again, So thanks for the help, but I probably wont be redrawing this.
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TwilightIsMagic Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Student General Artist
Well, 'least you know what to pay attention to next.
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